Today me and my class had another google meet with Donna she taught us what to do when we get a positive email that is not so nice here's my google slide I made.
I am a Year 5 student at Paparore School School in Northland, New Zealand. Mrs Junjovich is my teacher. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feed forward. Other times I will share my final published pieces. I would appreciate any feedback through leaving me a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment. Thank you
Thursday, September 23, 2021
Friday, September 17, 2021
SP Narrative writing
WALT: Follow the sequence of Narrative writing
This one bright sunny day on a lovely farm up at Paparore road. with some delicious fruit like bananas, apples and some pears. There was a Cat, a Dog,and a Cow. The Cow’s name is David, the Cat’s name is Buddy and the Dog’s name is Mana. They were all friends. The Cat is really good at catching food like mice, the Dog is really good at being sneaky and the Cow is really good at being super tall. So it was lunchtime and suddenly the dog wanted something off the tree.
The Dog was super hunger he felt like a banana so he tried to reach the banana from the banana tree but the poor Dog could not reach the banana so the dog strolled right over to cat and said “Good day’’ said the dog the cat answered with a ‘’Good thank you’’ said the cat the dog had a question the dog said “Cat could you get that banana in the tree please?’’ said the dog. The cat replied with ‘’No!’’ and the dog asked ‘’Why?’’ The cat said ‘’You really want to know?’’ said the cat the dog responded with ‘’yes!’’ the cat said ‘’It's because you're annoying’’ spoke the cat, so the dog matched away from the cat he was extremely mad like a shark then he walked up to the cow and said.
‘’Greetings cow’’ said the dog the cow said with a nice smile the cow replied with a ‘’Howdy’’ said the friendly cow then the Cow asked ‘’What could I do for you today my friend?’’ said the cow the dog then said ‘’Could you please get down that banana down from the tree please the cow then replied with “Of course I will’’ said the cow so the cow then said “Hop on my back’’ said the cow the dog the replied with “Thank you so much cow’’ spock the dog the cow replied with “ No problem my friend’’ so the dog hopped on the cows back so the cow walked over to the tree so dog could reach the banana the dog got the banana the dog had then said “Thank you so much” the cow respond with “No worries my mate” so the dog slided down his back and the dog could not stop thanking cow the cow kept saying stop then finally he had stopped so he ate his banana and the Dog was happy like a bird so the Cow had then walked away the so the cow walked back to his grass. So they all lived joyfully ever after. On the lovely farm
Self Assessment:
What I liked about my writing
I like that I was allowed to use my imagination
I also like that we could be creative
I like that we can have fun with it.
What I need to do improve my writing
I need to improve my proof-reading skills
I need to work on finishing my work on time
I need to stay focussed and on task for longer periods
Thursday, September 16, 2021
SP Bubble art
Today we are learning how to do bubble art today so first we had to find an image of bubbles so when you find an image of things we did during lock down so you pick some photos of what you did on lock down and once you have got your images you insert the your images.The Netflex image means I watched movies the Youtube means I watched Youtube some time the Roblox means I played my game some day as well and the last one means I played with my cat most days.
Friday, September 10, 2021
09/09/21
WALT: Describe how I’m feeling
Level 2- Back to school
This morning I woke up at 6:00 am because we had school today. I was super excited and nervous at the same time so I tried not to get too nervous. Well, I was waiting to go to school and I made some delicious breakfast. I had some delicious scrambled egg with some green onion in the egg on toast it was so delicious
When it was time to go I put my bag on and raced in the car. Mum dropped me off at school when I opened the door I saw everyone laughing, running and playing. So I jumped out of the car and waved bye to my Mum with excitement. I was walking to my class while everyone was running to go play with their friends then suddenly I saw Mihi and we both waved to each other. I then walked up to our classroom to hang up my bag but first I answered with a good morning to my teacher so then I hung my bag on my hook then I take my shoes off to take the chromebook on my desk then I handed in my home reader to my teacher then I went outside to hang out with Lucy and Mihi and we played busted it was funny because Lucy was getting pretty mad because me and Mihi kept saying busted to Lucy it was super fun as well. Then the bell went to go back to class.
When we got back to class Sir had an announcement on the intercom. It was about our school values. These two days we are working on RereKatanga and also about our mathletics, 100 nights reading names and making sure we're all ok. Then we did Karakia. Nico did Karakia and for Mihi my friend Mihi did the mihi. When they were done saying Karakia and mihi we did two Waiata the first one was Te Arorha then we sang Paparore. Next we sat down in our seats, then we did the roll. Our teacher then told us what we are doing today. After that we had to do some writing about how we are feeling about being back at school.
I am feeling super happy about being back at school and not at home as it was boring. The reason I am so happy to be back at school is because I am happy to see my friends and see my amazing teacher.