SP Narrative writing

 WALT: Add descriptive features to my Narrative

One super hot day at a Tropical island there was a Cheetah,Time traveller,and a kitten they do not get along that  well   the kitten does not do anything but she  will play any game and the cheetah and the time traveller call the little kitten Sky  time traveller is friend of the cheetah and they get along just fine and the time traveller she likes to play games with the cheetah and sometimes with  the kitten. And the time traveller goes by Keisha. The cheetah has super sharp claws. If anyone touches her you will get a cut and it will hurt she won’t hesitate to hurt you if you touch her. She goes by the name Alex and then they were all going to play a game until something happened. What could have happened?

Where is the little kitten? Where could she be?

Then  Alex and Keisha were about to play hide and seek with Sky but they could not find her anywhere they looked around the whole Island but  they couldn’t find her. Anywhere  they looked in the tree still couldn’t find her so they kept  looking till they had found her so they botched  searched and searched but they could not find her they were starting to get worried about Sky even tho they were not friends  with her they still got worried about her then they started getting much more scared every minute and then they keep looking and looking and calling out to Sky! but nothing didn’t seem to work they are getting tired but they couldn't leave Sky so they looked one finale time Alex had then asked Keisha “Why would she do something like this she is a good cat” so they looked and looked for her one more time then Alex and Keisha heard something coming from the tree what could that weird noise be from the tree?

They had found  Sky they were so happy

They found her in the tree but not any tree it was her tree for when she wants to get away and sleep with peace and quiet and not annoyed by the two idiots she doesn't get along with she was in her tree trying to sleep to get away from Alex and Keisha but well she was just trying. To get some sleep all she could hear was  Sky! Sky! And all she wanted was a bit of peace and quiet but she couldn't get the peace and quiet she wanted. She woke up and said “Shh, I'm trying to sleep here!” Alex and Keisha were so happy to see her though they both said sorry to wake you. Up and go back they both said. They were still happy to see her alive even though they weren’t friends. They sometimes still like to hang out with her even though they don’t get along.

The solution was that they had in every tree but they had missed one tree. The problem was that they couldn’t find the cat. The cat was just trying to sleep. Would you have found the cat? 

Self Assessment

I improved my writing by:

• I can find some juicy words for my writing 

• I can work fast on my brainstorm

• I can get on with my work

To improve my writing, I need to:

• I need to improve my writing skills by proofreading 

• I need to improve my writing skills by  working fast on my work 

• I need to improve my writing skills by making sure I read it properly  

        

SP Haka

 29/9/21

WALT: Haka 

There once was a man named Te Rauparaha. He was a strong and brave warrior who was a chief. He also had enemies he had all so needed some fighters to help him survive in battles.But no matter where he had seemed to go they were after him so he ran somewhere he hoped no one would find him. 

Te Rauparaha had ran to a place he had never heard before he ran to  Lake Rotoaira he said “You will get protection here” he told Te Rauparaha he  had then said again “Go to the potato pit”said te Whareranri when he went into the potato pit entrance it was dark and there was someone guiding the entrance. It was dark and there was some guiding the entrance of the potato pit. Her name is Te Rangi Koaea she is the one guiding the potato where Te Rauparaha’s enemies would never think to look in a potato pit or ask such an important woman. Then suddenly Te Rauparaha had heard voices coming from above him he had then said to himself will I die? Will I live?. Te Rauparaha emerged from the potato pit then he had seen light once more so he went to tell his tribe his story. That went to their children, their children and many more children and then came to us. 

Te whiti te ra.

Empowerment

 Today me and my class had another google meet with Donna she taught us what to do when we get a positive email that is not so nice here's my google slide I made.   

SP Narrative writing

WALT:  Follow the sequence of Narrative writing

This one bright sunny day on a lovely farm up at Paparore road.  with some delicious fruit like bananas, apples and some pears.  There was a Cat, a Dog,and a Cow. The Cow’s name is David, the Cat’s name is Buddy and the Dog’s name is Mana. They were all friends. The Cat  is really good at catching food like mice, the Dog is really good at being sneaky and the Cow is really good at being super tall. So it was lunchtime and suddenly the dog wanted something off the tree.

                                                    

The Dog was super hunger he felt like a banana so he tried to reach the banana from the banana tree but the poor Dog could not reach the banana so the dog strolled right over to cat and said “Good day’’ said the dog the cat answered with a ‘’Good thank you’’ said the cat the dog had a question the dog said “Cat could you get that banana in the tree please?’’ said the dog. The cat replied with ‘’No!’’ and  the dog asked ‘’Why?’’ The cat said ‘’You really want to know?’’ said the cat the dog responded with ‘’yes!’’ the cat said  ‘’It's because you're annoying’’ spoke the cat, so the dog matched away from  the cat  he was extremely mad like  a shark  then he walked up to the cow and said.

‘’Greetings  cow’’ said the dog the cow said with a nice smile the cow replied with a ‘’Howdy’’ said  the friendly cow then the Cow asked ‘’What could I  do for you today my friend?’’ said the cow the dog then said ‘’Could you please get down that banana down from the tree please the cow then replied with “Of course I will’’ said the cow so the cow then said “Hop on my back’’ said the cow the dog the replied with “Thank you so much cow’’ spock the dog the cow replied with “ No problem my friend’’ so the dog hopped on the cows back so the cow walked over to the tree so dog could reach the banana the dog got the banana the dog  had then said “Thank you so much” the cow respond with “No worries my mate” so the dog slided down his back and the dog could not stop thanking cow the cow kept saying stop then finally he had stopped so he ate his banana and the Dog was happy like a bird so the Cow had then walked away the so the cow walked back to his grass. So they all lived joyfully ever after. On the lovely farm  

Self Assessment: 

What I liked about  my writing

• I like that I was allowed to use my imagination 

• I also like that we could be creative 

• I like that we can have fun with it.

What I need to do improve my writing 

• I need to improve my proof-reading skills 

• I need to work on finishing my work on time 

• I need to stay focussed and on task for longer periods  

SP Bubble art

 Today we are learning  how to do bubble art today so first we had to find an image of bubbles so when you find an image of things we did during lock down so you pick some photos of what you did on lock down and once  you have got your images you insert the your images.The Netflex image means I watched movies the Youtube means I watched Youtube some time the Roblox means I played my game some day as well and the last one means I played with my cat most days.   

09/09/21

WALT: Describe how I’m feeling 

Level 2- Back to school

This morning I woke up at 6:00 am because we had school today. I was super excited and nervous at the same time so I tried not to get too nervous. Well,  I was waiting to go to school and I made some delicious breakfast. I had some delicious scrambled egg with some green onion in the egg on toast it was so  delicious    

When it was time to go I put my bag on and raced in the car. Mum dropped me off at school when I opened the door I saw everyone laughing, running and playing. So I jumped out of the car and waved bye to my Mum with excitement. I was walking to my class while everyone was running to go play with their  friends  then suddenly  I saw Mihi and we both waved to each other. I then walked up to our classroom to hang up  my bag but first  I answered with a  good morning to my teacher so then  I hung my bag on my hook then I take my shoes off to take the chromebook on my desk then I handed in my home reader to my teacher then I went outside to hang out with Lucy and Mihi and we played busted it was funny because Lucy was getting pretty mad because me and Mihi kept saying busted to Lucy it was super fun as well. Then the bell went to go back  to class.

When we got back to class Sir had an announcement on the intercom. It was about our school values. These two days we are working on RereKatanga and also about our mathletics, 100 nights reading names and making sure we're all ok.  Then we did Karakia. Nico did Karakia and for Mihi my friend Mihi did the mihi.  When they were done saying Karakia and mihi we did two Waiata the first one was Te Arorha then we sang Paparore.  Next we sat down in our seats, then we did the roll. Our teacher then told us what we are doing today.  After that we had to do some writing about how we are feeling about being back at school.

I am feeling super happy about being back at school and not at home as it was boring. The reason I am so happy to be back at school is because I am happy to see my friends and see my amazing teacher.           

           

10/08/21

WALT: Describe our school Olympic events 

Last Friday after morning tea Te Puawai participated in the mini olympics with the rest of  Paparore school. We had the events because only every four years the Olympics are held In Tokyo.  I felt very excited.

Golden child.

My favorite event was Golden child because it's really fun and we were all yelling “Run!”  One team was running around the whole court and the other team was shouting the goals to try to stop the runners  from running all the way around the court. The team that ran around the court real fast were the winners.  The runners  had to then shoot  the goals and the goal people turned into runners. I felt tired from running around the whole court!

Soccer

After golden child we went to soccer and our team was the non-bibs and the other team had bibs on so we vs  them.   I  saw everyone kicking the ball trying to take the ball off each other to get into the goals. I felt tired as a spider.   But we still played. It was really fun. The first round the non bibs won, the second round  the bibs team won so  it was a tie and a really good  game.

Last event.

The last event was to see how far you can go. Mrs Radich said we would get time for at least two or three rounds.was hosting. It was existing so you have to see how far you can jump and her boot was the line Grace went first she took a big jump and she got pretty far so then we all tried to get  passed her spot then. Koda went next but she didn’t make it so Millan had gone next he made it so then we had to try to bet his spot but I couldn't make it past. But we all just had fun with it.